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f i r s t o f f .
GIRL. SO FRACKIN RELATABLE.
s e c o n d .
your writing style is so quirky and amazin'! keep it up!

this was long O-O but rlly good! dont quit writing. DONT DO IT!

wwwwwwwwwaa aa aa ait a miiinuuute.

i relate to jake omg
~ oddy

elvis presleyyyyy yesss
~ oddy

this was good, but quite brutal...

this is good, but you might want to consider an editor! i can see a pattern of grammatical errors, and that's okay! writing takes a lot of work.
~ oddy