United States • 21 y/o • MaleReviews Received
This was written so well, I can't even....
I like this. It's told like a fairy tale in some ways, and I feel like you're leading up to something, which is one of the most important feelings to communicate in writing. I'll be reading the other prequels when you submit them.
Interesting. I really like the description of the demons.
In fact, I am reading this! And no, not all the credit goes to me! This is a beautiful story, yet sad. As for ideas, there's another "Writing Prompt I'm writing right now! You can totally take ideas for there. :P Have fun writing and I will look forward to reading your stories! :D
This is pretty interesting. I wondered where the demons came from and who was the hero and his partner! I need to know more! The fighting description is incredible and I could easily imagine it!
Overall, great work! I'm looking forward to a sequel!
What is does it mean to be a dying star? Beautifully written, amazingly organized, more of a mental conflict than an actual conflict. Well done! :)
