Optimism101

I don't think it's too short. Sometimes less is more.

You captured my emotions all in one.

This is a really good piece! Like Justice_Arabia said, you captured all my emotions in one

Wow! This is beautiful. Especially the moral at the end. Keep up the great work!

This is sooooo good! It's describing about being alive but now living your life. Does that even make sense? I don't think so. Anyway, great story! Keep it up! :)

beautiful work
deep yet true

beautiful and full of jolliness; keep it up

This was an interesting read! Great story, even though it takes some understanding at the beginning. And also, I'm glad you could get ideas from me! Overall, great work. :D