United States • 20 y/o • MaleReviews Received
What is does it mean to be a dying star? Beautifully written, amazingly organized, more of a mental conflict than an actual conflict. Well done! :)
This is pretty interesting. I wondered where the demons came from and who was the hero and his partner! I need to know more! The fighting description is incredible and I could easily imagine it!
Overall, great work! I'm looking forward to a sequel!
In fact, I am reading this! And no, not all the credit goes to me! This is a beautiful story, yet sad. As for ideas, there's another "Writing Prompt I'm writing right now! You can totally take ideas for there. :P Have fun writing and I will look forward to reading your stories! :D
Interesting. I really like the description of the demons.
I like this. It's told like a fairy tale in some ways, and I feel like you're leading up to something, which is one of the most important feelings to communicate in writing. I'll be reading the other prequels when you submit them.
This was written so well, I can't even....
