Optimism101

So much... pain. Suffering, and emotion. I know whoever did this to you would be sorry after reading this. And... I'm sorry you had to go through this. This sounds like hell with no return.

Its a good piece. The way the monster is described as being one and none is very interesting. To be honest I had to re-read a bit because I read the last line with a British accent and I was pretty sure that wasn't how it was supposed to go down, but that doesn't throw the quality down in any way.
gg

Ouch

I truly hope this isn't based off of past or present circumstances. However, it is a good piece. Very good. Nice rhyming work. Some of those words could be improved for a better rhyme, but otherwise it is very nice.

Wow you truly are becoming a good author. You still have a path to get there, but its closer than ever before

Nice piece

haha you have writers block
Okay sorry I just needed to say that.
First off, I liked what you did with the whole writing thing, where everything is like that.
But also like for real that happens all the time with me too XD.
Good job!

That's a good you. Not just a nice autobiography piece, but it helps for empowerment too!
Good job!

You know, I was curious why you weren't active
Then I thought you were working on something
I was right
This is beautiful
Very energetic, and sweet
You did a good job
and yes loveling11 is a spammer, i got like 5 separate messages from them and finally blocked them

You know, i like it.
I always love interesting concepts and plots, especially with fantasies.
It's amazing what the mind can come up with.
Anyways, I did feel like it was a little bit rushed, maybe you could spend some time earlier defining some of the characteristics of a cloud walker and what they do and such. And I know that not revealing things until later is a very fun thing to do when writing, but sometimes it just leaves others confused.
Overall, it's a very nice story, and it has a lot of potential!
Keep Writing! From one author to another.