Optimism101

Nice. A little misleading, but isn't that a good thing? An enjoyable story, and definitely is relate-able.

Hurts. A good definition, but it still hurts. Pain is something we all have to deal with, but acceptance is more important. A well written poem. Describes one's nightmares well.

Dang. This one, is amazing. It expresses something that we all have to deal with. That lifelong bond that gets broken. That trust that you have that is so easily removed. It is written with such certainty, such truth, and after reading the Author Notes, it makes sense. It's always hard, and always will be, but we can always move on. We can always grow to be better. With spelling and grammar, it could use some more edits as well, but as a story, and autobiography, it's amazing.

I can relate to this. Maybe not directly, but from a different point of view. It's sad to see what I don't, to know the side I will never see. I can't imagine the pain it would bring. On another note, it expresses the sadness, the hurt, the pain, everything. It shows every second of the event, and it hurts. It really does. I feel so bad for a fictional character. It is well worded, I wasn't able to find mistakes easily, and its amazing. I hope you keep writing And as long as you do, I will keep reading.

Apparently, all you write is cliffhangers! Gah! Keep writing! Sooooooooooooo many questions, so many mysteries, I bet one day you will write a story that is completely just un-answered questions, and it will be like 10 pages! Oh wait, there are more parts XD. I'll get to those. In the meantime, nice premise

(Repeat what I stated in the first review for this series)

Everyone needs that You. And no one wants to lose them. This is every emotion people need. Lord of the Rings... Never feel this pain. Haha, inside jokes :P. Otherwise, this is relate-able on so, so many levels. Keep posting your depressing stuff on here, and I will keep reading. Talk to me if you ever feel the need to.

(Repeat what I stated in the first review of this series) I can't come up with more original content XD