Optimism101

Everyone does.
Don't know if it was intended, but the story has 123 words, which is pretty sweet.
Everyone breaks
You just gotta know how to piece yourself back together.

Wow. Transformation, and difference. Makes me wanna grab a hammer if ya know what I'm saying. Nice one! Glad to see you doing writes! Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Nice to see another one out there

Ohhhh boy. This is a good intro! It actually sets up a nice haunted-house-ghostbusters-luigi's-mansion-scooby-doo sorta story. Many different paths open, and many different options ahead.
However you say it's gonna have murder and stuff.
So scrap all that and replace it with some deep crap. Maybe some Us, and stuffs.
Otherwise, you got a nice setup!
Keep writing! And we will keep reading!

THat's a sweet story! It looks like it's from the perspective of a sheltered kid. But, if not, then it's still pretty sweet! Setting it up as either a story for a devilish world, or one of sheltered children. Who knows? (Well, of course you do, I mean, you wrote this)
But, I love it! Keep writing! We will keep reading!

"So lost." I love the song selection. Faded is one of the top hits I have ever heard. It is on my playlist like 5 times XD. That refference made me sooooooooooooooooooooo happy. Otherwise, its an amazing story, and tells a beautiful tale. Sad, but beautiful.

Thanks, happy after Valentines as well. A loving story, and it really is a feel-good. Thanks for the happiness

Another great part to a series! Adds more description about Ren, and sets him up for greater stuff later! (Personal predictions. My friends hate movie nights with me) Still so many questions unanswered, but I'm sure they will be answered due time. Keep writing! We will keep reading!