Optimism101

OOop. Now we are getting somewhere. One last question, times 4, where are they going? Where did he come from? Where did he go? Where did he come from cotton eye joe?

GRRRR! Still there are questions unanswered! You are an attention grabber for sure. At least one more part. One more question answered.

Huh.... Was not expecting that.....
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Nice story.
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Not much else to say, sorry

"Where are you now?" It's not a bad poem. It is a sort of chaotic, that connects to someones fear of losing them. Maybe one day you should try happy poems. I bet they would uplift more people than ever were down.

It's really good! If you want to try and make it better, I reccomend adding more descriptions, to help me picture. Maybe more details about the lake, or him.

*insert deviation of "haha" here*
Funny, nice one.
A little overused, but you played it out in such a way that it kinda went away from the norm.
Good One!
Can't wait for the next one.
Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Oh damn

I get that. It's like a way to cover up your feelings without anyone knowing that's how you feel. Or it could be used to make an offensive joke. Either way.