United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Received
I really feel this right now. Good job putting it into words. The boat analogy made a strong mental image.
this hits me but not terribly deep
Huh. I don't know how to say what I'm thinking, but I like what this story does to make the reader think.
I really enjoyed the first couple of paragraphs about tragedy. Loren's mental dialogue is interesting to watch. Can't wait to read more :)
Ooh~ I like the mystery revolved around this! Why did he leave? What does "leave" even mean in this context? Why would Kol give him away? So many questions, I love it! Good job :)
Wow hit the nail on the head on this one. I have this dilemma too. All I can do is write it here hoping they will come across my story one day.
I was surprised by how much I enjoyed this. I loved the characters and the way you wrote the whole scene. It was quite delightful!
aMaZiNg!! i really loved how at the end you said "the boy in the blue t-shirt" it really made it kind of mysterious. but i also enjoyed how its like a letter. KEEP WRITING!! :P