Thomas Ray

It doesn't have to rhyme. It's cute as is.

As with most poems, there are some strange word choices here, but that isn't important. The emotional story it tells is awesome.

I think if I was in her situation, I would be less of the "nobody likes me" and more of "you don't even know me."
But I don't know this character very well yet, and we aren't in her head, so there's some ammount of mystery in regards to what she actually feels.
I'm going to read the next part now.

I can't really tell how long they've known each other for... "love", already?

That was a surprisingly heart-warming twist! Nice job!

This is kind of intriguing. Keep going, by all means.

I like this story!