United States • 21 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Very entertaining! You have a few grammatical errors, such as using commas when necessary. If you used the names of the characters a bit more when they talked, it would make it more clear as to who is speaking. I think that's about it. You're really talented!
Can't wait to see where this is going, eek! You did a great job conveying that Georgie liked Shaydon. Keep writing, you're really good!
It was a really good story! Great job. I can't wait to read more!
Very intriguing! A few grammatical errors, but those are easy to fix. Keep going, you're very talented!
I'm so sorry you felt this way! I'm glad to hear you're doing better though. I have to admit, I sort of suspected it. I have friends that deal with depression and I know how badly it can affect them. Stay strong! Even if covid never ends, we can still stick together. We're going out in public more and it's becoming less of an issue, sort of like the flu. It can be scary, but just know that we are all here for you. Keep writing, you have so much creative energy!
thank goodness that it's fake! I don't know you but hey, don't be sad :(
Ophelia