Zack

I really like this poem. Great job!

Noice! My mom has always tried to make me do things and I know I disappoint her because of that, but she didn't know why I didn't want to do the things she wanted me to until recently. (for the past year technically, actually I take that back. 2 years!) :) Don't be the person on the outside, become the person on the inside.

Very good poem! Keep up the good work :)

Really nice poem! and nicely written.

That really did get intense! lol Great story!

I might actually want to cry. Tis a very sad story.

I actually want to watch the movie you got inspiration from.

I found the ending really funny! Good job!