Lyn

I love how called his goggles “color-correcting glasses,” it just made me laugh. Great job! Your writing always brings a smile to my face, no matter what the story’s about.

O. M. G. That was literally incredible! The way it was written, the way you repeated the same thing a couple times, the way the main character struggled to not be caught in the loop, every last sentence was incredible. You did an amazing job and I would love to see more like this!

This is practically perfect in every way. I love how you described the verses and connected them to your own life. I will have to read through Job when I get the chance because the verses you cited have inspired me to search for others like them. A brilliant piece of writing! I hope you will continue to show your artistic side through writing.

This is great! You're right, there's no way to turn back the clock. But if confess with your mouth and believe in your heart that Jesus Christ died for your sins you will be saved!
A very inspiring piece of writing, great job! Also, when writing a stanza try using shift+enter and then just regular enter for a new stanza. I hope this helps!

This is so sad :( I hope you're doing alright. I'm here to talk if you wanna, just remember that.
The poem was really good, though! I love how you said that the father was a hero. That really put the oomph in it. I love how it's a story-poem, where the poem tells a story. You're very talented!

Wow, incredible! Absolutely worth the wait! I like how you made it a bit longer and added more suspense, it really influenced my reaction. Great job!

Wow, this was perfect. I like how you left off right there when he sees her again. But, I thought he had tried to, y'know, follow in Everli's footsteps. What exactly happened is what I wanna know. Great writing, tho!

This is really sweet, and I know that whoever your talking about will enjoy reading this. Good luck with 'em! ;)