United States • 18 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Glad I don't have a sister XD
Oh, wait I am the sister-
You did great! I enjoyed reading it! Just a few grammatical mistakes, but that's alright. As you said, it's your first time. Great job! You abused the caps a little bit, but that's a minor mistake. I loved the positivity! Keep writing, you're going places! <3
Very intriguing! A few grammatical errors, but those are easy to fix. Keep going, you're very talented!
Very entertaining! You have a few grammatical errors, such as using commas when necessary. If you used the names of the characters a bit more when they talked, it would make it more clear as to who is speaking. I think that's about it. You're really talented!
Can't wait to see where this is going, eek! You did a great job conveying that Georgie liked Shaydon. Keep writing, you're really good!
It was a really good story! Great job. I can't wait to read more!
I'm so sorry you felt this way! I'm glad to hear you're doing better though. I have to admit, I sort of suspected it. I have friends that deal with depression and I know how badly it can affect them. Stay strong! Even if covid never ends, we can still stick together. We're going out in public more and it's becoming less of an issue, sort of like the flu. It can be scary, but just know that we are all here for you. Keep writing, you have so much creative energy!
Lost_Star's right! There are plenty of other guys out there who would die to love you the way that boy never could. Keep searching, you'll find them eventually! Great writing, by the way, I could really feel your emotion.