This is really great especially the fact that this reminds me of the amine 'Dance with Devils'. Great way of writing it.
This is really heart felt and definitely pulls at your heart
This is really sad but shows that it could take the smallest amount of pressure to push someone over. It's so true about what some people have done and why they have do it. They way you wrote it as well was just amazing. It really makes you feel for your character.
That was really good for your first story. The last paragraph is a bit confusing but other than that I think that was well written. 😜😜
That is so sad but still amazing. I love the storyline and how it all goes together and people do go through things like this so it's nice to see things like this to help others know what is happening. Amazing.
This is really good and I love the way it ends it just that little bit better. Amazing
That is so sad and the way you were talking as if it was someone you know then say it was you made it more sad and upsetting. I thought that I was going to cry and I was about to. So the language you use is amazing.
OH MY GOD. That is amazing. I love it.