Skylar

Wow, you're really good! I read one of your other stories, The Girl Who Is Friends With Everybody, and I loved it. The emotion is really strong in your writing, and it's amazing! I hope you continue writing!

This is exactly how I feel, and because I know this feeling, this becomes so much more than what it says.

Aw! I really love this!

This is really beautiful. I can't really tell if you were meaning to write about yourself, or about someone else, or both, but I think that either way this is a very powerful work. It really painted a picture for me, and I think others would agree.

Well, Henna is weird, and Sir Ayren seems kinda fishy, but I'm sure there's more on that later.

I love the vibe this story gives! Very fairy tale esque, which is a bop. As for the mushrooms, I honestly wouldn't have noticed if not for the other reviews pointing them out. That is to say, I don't have a problem with them, because the focus isn't necessarily the mushrooms, but that she knows about them.

Part of the thing with the name is the style your going for. Lu sounds (to me) like a name of a fantasy type world. Names like the ones melissak suggested fit the world, and the ones I would say most fits your style are Keon or Yusuf, although the others are fine as well. The names sound a bit too rich for a poor boy, especially if he's an orphan. I looked up some names (although I feel like that's never very satisfying), and I found a few that were okay.
Ern
Pepin
William
Liam
Most of the others were kinda weird. Hope this helps!

This is so amazing! I love the flow!