United States • 18 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Interesting start!
interesting. I think it's cool that the people are like animal/creature hybrids. looking forward to reading more!
Okay, I thought this was really impressive. It's brief but really subtle, and I feel like there's a lot that I was able to get out of it from Clementine's past.
I can't believe they wore clown costumes... that's awesome!
It's sad the dad died tho. rip.
Me who wasnt trying to read anything but the
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As always, your writing is great, and I also wanna point out the fact that I thought that hook was brilliant! Like, right from the beginning I was drawn into what would happen next.
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You could give us readers the satifaction, and make her Ex. (I forgot the name, i think it was like Rawn? Idk Ik it started with a R) Then we call all help her burn the bodie >:D
That or, Noaliam.
hmmmm, shapeshifting. Wait, thats my power in the role plays i have with my friends! are u psycut o.O