United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
really good! I want you to write more! Keep up the good stories!
Great Story! Could you write another chapter of this! I want to read more😄
OMG!! sooo good! Write some more^.^
This was amazing!!!! Make a part 2!!!!!
Good job, I like the emotion.
Good job however there were a couple of mistakes.
Good Job! Loved it!
yes! But some grammer mistakes like when you said " Like a rainbow landed on me but", change the me to a my. Also a few other mistakes