United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Don't listen to Andy. Hes completely and totally wrong,this has a wonderfully beautiful message to tell and I love how you used an egg as an example super creative and brilliant. Keep on writing and don't let mean and untrue comments make you stop writing!(And I get that i'm 11 and someone who most people would call immature and not the best writer but whatever I love your story!) There should be a 6 star because this one deserves 6 not 5 stars!
This is such a cute poem. Write more you have a great skill!
This is such an inspiring sad story! I love it.
Great job!
This is such a great lesson and story! I love it and you must make more!!!! There's nothing wrong with this story so don't listen to Apemann!! Your a amazing writer and please keep on writing stories!
Such a great start to a story! Cant wait to see where this goes!
my crush got a girlfriend today so I was crying and reading this made me forget all about it! great job its hilarious!
this was such a simple and happy story! I love it.