Rora

I suppose in way this story paints a picture of what it's really like to move. We often get settled and attached to those around us, so when change threatens to rip us from that comfort we have a hard time letting it all go. So, good job! This is amazing.

I think this is a beautiful outlook on life, and I love it.

Very interesting...

This so touching, heart wrenching in a way. But it shows how it is in a way that can be understood. Fantastic job!

As far as the story goes, the grammar and English side of things could be improved. But once again you wrote a story that is great.

This is another amazing way to look at life, we all have trials and this poem illustrates that fact in a way all of us can appreciate.

Could be edited, but still. Wow. That was good.

Pretty good...