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wow, this sounds like the start of a really good movie. lol
yes. yes. YES. I hate talking so much. it's just so difficult and for no reason. and then right when you think that you've totally messed up the conversation you get that last random voice crack (okay that might just be me).
RELATABLE THOUGH-
aww traceyy :(
oooo.. i loved that cliffhanger!
Your story was kind of hard to follow. But from the parts that I could understand I think it's coming along.
Though if you could add names for the characters and patch up a few errors I think that it could be spot on. Good job! ^^
i love how finn and zeke are just always thinking about each other :')))
i. am. intrigued. great jobb!!!
aww i love how Hrida's so peaceful and cuteee