Black Sheep

Keep up the good work. You are a great writer

I like this but I wishing for a happy ending.

Haha. That is what he gets

I really like this

The are some grammatical errors but other wise it is really good. Cannot wait to read more of your writing.

It is good, you just have a few spelling mistakes

Great story, I cannot wait to read more of your work.

I think if you explained it to your mom she would try to understand, I believe in you. Keep on writing, I love reading your work