Durandal

I love this! I grew up being alone and my only friends being imaginary, so this struck me in a very personal way.

Stop playing with my emotions Misty! First I thought she was going to be kidnapped(the gray colorless buildings) Then she was going to get married, and then he was going to die. But no! She was about to get married and I was all excited. Then BLAM! He dies, the wedding was a daydream, and my heart was crushed.

Love it! Great cliff hanger. At the beginning of this chapter, did you mean Gimli instead of Gimil? It's just something I noticed, and I don't remember a Gimil.

Legolas will always be the best.

This is a good story, it says a lot about life.

I love this, and I want to know what happens. Please write 'The Lucky Dog' part 2. Unless there already is one and I just didn't notice.

This is a good story. You did good. There were a few places where it could use a comma or a semicolon, but its still a great story.

That was very interesting. And scary. You're doing a good job!