Durandal

Stop playing with my emotions Misty! First I thought she was going to be kidnapped(the gray colorless buildings) Then she was going to get married, and then he was going to die. But no! She was about to get married and I was all excited. Then BLAM! He dies, the wedding was a daydream, and my heart was crushed.

Your scaring me man!

Good job, it was great

That was good, I'm no good at horror stories.

Wow. This is getting interesting.

You did good, its fun and I now know why you should never try to eat a hedgehog.

You did good! The ending felt a little rushed, but it was still a good story.

That's dark, but it's a true representation of some people's lives. Good job!