Durandal

You did good! The ending felt a little rushed, but it was still a good story.

ruling a kingdom by fear is never a good idea, good job.

Good job!

Good job! That was intence.

Wow! That was a great story. I hope you're writing a sequel. If so, I can't wait!

I can't wait till the next part. Good job!

You did really good on these, my favorite is probably the one about darkness.

Good story, it could have ended badly.