United States • 22 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Work one your grammar and be sure you had some suspense . But it is pretty good.
this is good keep it up
I like it but you could add more feel to it
So effin funny
I LOVE IT. You can tell a very good story. AND I love anime including attack on titans
love it
You are an amazing writer and you should keep writing stuff like this it is so real.
Well he is now lol