hercules

BEN BROWN

I enjoyed this just as much as the first part. Well done.

I really enjoyed this story. Well done.

A brilliant and very amusing story. Reading that brought to mind the times when I was at school. I had to prevent myself from bursting out laughing when the boys wound up my teachers. Well done.

I really enjoyed this story. It brought to mind the Hound of the Baskervilles. Well done.

A swell story. The way the prisoner moves things about with his power brings to mind the Force in Star Wars. Well done.

I enjoyed your story. You write very well. Self confidence is what you need. Well done.

BEN BROWN

Another excellent story. The way you described the colours at the beginning brought to mind the twelve astrological star signs. Towards the end it made me think of the light and shadow traits of ones character. Well done.

BEN BROWN

A great story. It reminds me of the Never Ending story when Bastian ends up reading the story in his school attic. I will read the rest of your stories. Well done.