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it's very simple, but hold such a deep meaning! Keep it up!

Aw, this is so sweet. It's slightly weird, but it's so true! Beautifully written in few words. Keep it up!

Everyday of my life sucked until I read this.
I kind of really feel bad for them though...

Random. But good.

depressing...but it has a great moral to it

hey! i loved this little poem!
if you would like some constructive criticism i've got some:
it seems like you're trying a bit too hard to make things rhyme. not that there's anything wrong with that, but it seems a little awkward. not all poems need to rhyme at the end.
besides that, i think its amazing! great job!

I like how you connected this story to others...fascinating friendship!

Dark but beautifully written. Love twists people's minds and I feel like you showed that in this story. Great job!