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I'm so sorry. Nicely written.

continue this please! Cliffhangers drive me crazy.

I would be scared out of my mind. When I was in 1st grade, we heard a gun sound by the school and I was terrified. Beautifully written and keep it up!

I want to know what happens next! Keep up the great work.

So sweet! Please write more. This is is so interesting and keep up the good work.

Write more please! What happens next? The child needs some happiness in his life. Nice work!

This is so well written! I really should say this at birthday parties...
Keep up the good work!

Great story, Feminist123! But maybe change the age to 12+ since there's a bad word? Besides that, it's great! Keep it up! :)