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I need to say this to every new person I meet... Keep up the great work!

I like how you connected this story to others...fascinating friendship!

Nice...but maybe you can describe how love can be good too? Besides that, I think it's a nice story. Can't wait to read the next one!

This poem really shows the two side of things. The good and bad part. Great and keep writing!

Hi! Nice poem! Musing means it's reflection or thought of something.

I'm so sorry. Nicely written.

continue this please! Cliffhangers drive me crazy.

I would be scared out of my mind. When I was in 1st grade, we heard a gun sound by the school and I was terrified. Beautifully written and keep it up!