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This is sooooo good! It's describing about being alive but now living your life. Does that even make sense? I don't think so. Anyway, great story! Keep it up! :)

I want to know what happens next! Keep up the great work.

Holy crap. Is this real? Please don't say this is real. I'm so sorry!

This is so well written! I really should say this at birthday parties...
Keep up the good work!

I really liked House On Mango Street, by the way! Anyway, this is a great vignette! Keep up the good work.

This was an interesting read! Great story, even though it takes some understanding at the beginning. And also, I'm glad you could get ideas from me! Overall, great work. :D

This is pretty interesting. I wondered where the demons came from and who was the hero and his partner! I need to know more! The fighting description is incredible and I could easily imagine it!
Overall, great work! I'm looking forward to a sequel!

In fact, I am reading this! And no, not all the credit goes to me! This is a beautiful story, yet sad. As for ideas, there's another "Writing Prompt I'm writing right now! You can totally take ideas for there. :P Have fun writing and I will look forward to reading your stories! :D