Australia • 18 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
I'm not quite a big fan of this story in particular if you had of added more story before this and had less grammar problems in this piece of text I would've enjoyed it more.
You could've punctuated this better and added a better back story/origin but other then that it's pretty good.
Yo, this is so awesome!!
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I honestly love this piece of writing there is nothing I would change about it, hope you make a part two.
Yooooo this was so cool :D
I love how well written this, well done!! and I hope you're ok :(
really good story line, love it!!