Reviews Given
really good story line, love it!!
I love how well written this, well done!! and I hope you're ok :(
This is actually really good!!
:))))
Yooooo this was so cool :D
Yo, this is so awesome!!
You could've punctuated this better and added a better back story/origin but other then that it's pretty good.
I honestly love this piece of writing there is nothing I would change about it, hope you make a part two.