United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
It's a good story. You may want to edit the "dooes" to make it seem less weird. Also are all the people in the story the same in real life, like at our school?
yeesh! ScArY! Was this the one that was gonna be called Midwest, USA?
I really like it. Good job!
simple, amazing, inspiring & a great poem!
Great story. This inspired me and I can't wait to read the other parts. Keep on writing.
yeesh! That was creepy! Keep on writing those horror stories!
I would add more detail as The Valhallan recommended. Also why is he called the night watcher?
ok......?