Oxygen

This story touched my heart because I also lost my grandmother. It happened several years ago but it feels as if it has only been two day. Keep on writing

HOLY COW! That cliff hanger tho. Good job. You made me want to hide under my bed. Keep on writing

wow. This poem was fun and well written. Keep on writing!

I really liked this. It is inspirational. Good job.

*sniffle*sniffle*. This is so sad but so good. Keep on writing more poems. Keep up the great work.

Wow. That was a good story. I like it. Keep on writing.

Whoa! Plot twist. I loved that one. This part was my favorite. Keep on writing this story. I can't wait for you to be done with it! Ah so good! Keep on going! This series/story is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.

SO good. YES!!!! I really like the metaphor about the straight line and the pencil and the paper. Really well though out. Keep on writting