Oxygen

*sniffle*sniffle*. This is so sad but so good. Keep on writing more poems. Keep up the great work.

I really liked this. It is inspirational. Good job.

wow. This poem was fun and well written. Keep on writing!

HOLY COW! That cliff hanger tho. Good job. You made me want to hide under my bed. Keep on writing

This story touched my heart because I also lost my grandmother. It happened several years ago but it feels as if it has only been two day. Keep on writing

Wow! Really good poem. I liked it. Keep on writing!

Cliffhanger! Good job!

Cliffhanger! I'm glad I have drawers under my bed now, because I wouldn't want whatever down there under my bed. It's a good story for your first one. Keep on writing.