Oxygen

Good poem. Great work. Keep on writing! :D

I love it. I love the suspense and the mystery. Keep on writing more please!

It calmed all right. Good job. The island perhaps is Catalina?

iNtEnSe! it really will be! Keep on writing!

Ah so beautiful. Wonderful. *round of applause* Second chapter coming out on my profile.

ok......?

I would add more detail as The Valhallan recommended. Also why is he called the night watcher?

yeesh! That was creepy! Keep on writing those horror stories!