United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Once again... AWESOME! The start off line with the "hunk of stuff" was fireeee!!!🔥🔥🔥 I am sooooo looking forward to the next part!
I did have to pull out the Google Spanish translator.... But I think it's awesome that you incorporated another language in your story -- it really added to the effect. The translations made me laugh a little at how spiteful some of the words were (especially the mom's... I was like "Omg she did not just go there..."). I really like the story so far!!!! :D
ooooo. I love it! I think the words/lyrics would be a great song. :D
oh. my. gawd. THE GIANT HEDGEHOG!!! XD
I definitely regret what I said earlier now....
Poor Zekey... also, random thought, but I thought it was weird that the teacher's name is so close to TruMoo... maybe I just want choco milk. :P
Poor doggy... rest in peace. <3
Wow, that really puts things into perspective. Nice job! It's really tragic about the island though.
Chills... I'm gonna have a hard time sleeping tonight. Nice job! :)