Despicable_Moi

Beautiful! <3
That hook is amazing; right from the first line I felt that I was really drawn into what would be said next. Hooks are something I really struggle with, so I can recognize a really well written one when I see it.
I also just really love it in general. When I read this, it was a little crazy because I was imagining like inspirational music in the background and the ending really showed how the speaker's views had changed. Spectacular!!! <3

I had to read this several times throughout the day cuz I love it soooo much. Idk if other people see it this way, but to me it felt deep, but not unbearably so. Like, it's not overthought, it just is. I really have no other way to explain that. I also really like the rhyming. The scheme wasn't the same exactly, but I feel like where the rhyming words were just made each section really click. Once again, I loveee it! And I can't wait to read more from you!!! :D

Massive yikes to the nose bleeds... but Buggy is such a cute name! <3
And I am in complete support of watching VD, it's the bestest, and probably what I'd put on too for literally any reason.

okayyyy... Liomi? that's the best ship name I could come up with.
and thanks for the hybrid explanations, that was really helpful!

interesting. I think it's cool that the people are like animal/creature hybrids. looking forward to reading more!

As always, your writing is great, and I also wanna point out the fact that I thought that hook was brilliant! Like, right from the beginning I was drawn into what would happen next.

Okay, I thought this was really impressive. It's brief but really subtle, and I feel like there's a lot that I was able to get out of it from Clementine's past.

That took an interesting turn.... o-o
Can't wait to read more!