United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
I like this idea! It's like Hunger Games, but for the mind. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes!
whoaaaaa... Elijah did not--
ooooooo. Well, that happened.... The Codista ship has set sail!
Cuteee! Ina sounds adorable! <3
WHAT?!?!?! *Threat to Codista detected, permission to destroy?!?*
oh no...
oooo. this already sounds interesting. I love your hook, it immediately drew me into the story.
I did have to pull out the Google Spanish translator.... But I think it's awesome that you incorporated another language in your story -- it really added to the effect. The translations made me laugh a little at how spiteful some of the words were (especially the mom's... I was like "Omg she did not just go there..."). I really like the story so far!!!! :D