Reviews Given
I like this idea.
Awww... that's even more tragic!!! I still love it, but I'm internally crying. Such sweet parents... <3
Wowza. The last line gave me chills. Nice job!
Spooky... I loved reading this! I think that one thing you did right, was all the description. That made a huge deal. One 'wrong' that really isn't that bad is that I wish there was more interaction with the mannequins. Other than that, I think you did an amazing job! :)
Such a sweet memory! Keep writing!!! <3 :)
So deep. I really don't have words to describe it. Keep writing, for that was beautiful. :)
This is sooo sweeeeeet! I'll try to remember this the next time I'm having a bad day... "This is just a seed, I've gotta get back to the melon". And I definitely agree with not having enough patience to write stories sometimes. I'm suffering from my self-diagnosed, worst strain of writer's block right now! Again, I loved this piece, and I hope to read more of what you write! :D
Nice intro, and love the description. I can really picture how everything is set up in the room.
And I love the title font btw!