United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
awwwww a German Shepherddd!!! That's one of the types of dogs I really want in the future! <3
and I have a kind of hate/love relationship with my younger siblings too o.o
as always, nice job! :D
Beautiful! <3
That hook is amazing; right from the first line I felt that I was really drawn into what would be said next. Hooks are something I really struggle with, so I can recognize a really well written one when I see it.
I also just really love it in general. When I read this, it was a little crazy because I was imagining like inspirational music in the background and the ending really showed how the speaker's views had changed. Spectacular!!! <3
awwwww! eternal love!!! <3
I had to read this several times throughout the day cuz I love it soooo much. Idk if other people see it this way, but to me it felt deep, but not unbearably so. Like, it's not overthought, it just is. I really have no other way to explain that. I also really like the rhyming. The scheme wasn't the same exactly, but I feel like where the rhyming words were just made each section really click. Once again, I loveee it! And I can't wait to read more from you!!! :D
Andy got rejected </3
Ca-rhys-ta???
Nice intro, and love the description. I can really picture how everything is set up in the room.
And I love the title font btw!