France • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
The opening was really cool... it actually draw my attention. I love the story and there meeting and stuff. I feel that u should write in more description that will make it more interesting and it will definitely draws more attention.
It creates a scene in the reader's mind.
Yes, I agree with @IanG... punctuation was an issue and there were some spelling mistakes also.
Overall, I have to say, you are great, dude! Keep it up!
XOXO,
Sansid
I guess you should write a bit more, I mean like I started reading a part and then, in a few seconds it's over... I mean the story is gr8 but it is really slow!
I hope u get it what I am trying to say... :)
Wow!!! Amazing! @_vidhi_3015
It was cool... I felt just like when I fight with my mum...
But I found it really short. I felt that The story had just started and then it ended sooo soon!
Very true...
Um.... BookNerd123...
I have one complain.... YOUR STORIES ARE EXTREMELY SHORT!!!
I mean that you write really short in one part and I feel (MY OPINION, PLEASE) it is very irritating and weird!
Hope u understand!
XOXO,
Sansid