Reviews Received
I enjoyed your story. Well done.
"You know I can't."
"Actually, sugar, you can."
Love the dynamic between these two. I'm excited to read more. Great job! :D
Glad to see your stories are still as good as the day I lost them... I hope life's been treating you well.
This is very well written! Good job!
nice i like the story, i know it is a short story, but maybe next time add some more details? idk but it was good
I like this.
You know, i like it.
I always love interesting concepts and plots, especially with fantasies.
It's amazing what the mind can come up with.
Anyways, I did feel like it was a little bit rushed, maybe you could spend some time earlier defining some of the characteristics of a cloud walker and what they do and such. And I know that not revealing things until later is a very fun thing to do when writing, but sometimes it just leaves others confused.
Overall, it's a very nice story, and it has a lot of potential!
Keep Writing! From one author to another.
Wow! Cool