slade

Idk how you've been, or what's going on in your life today, but I'm glad I read this, and I hope you're doing a lot better, or at least doing well for yourself.


Yours Truly,
Slade

Glad to see your stories are still as good as the day I lost them... I hope life's been treating you well.

I'm really liking this storyline you have going on, covering a lot of bases in life that not many people cover. Not to mention you do a damn fine job in doing so, can't wait for the next part to see where it goes!

I'm actually surprised with how this concluded, needless to say how I expected it to end was spun around a 180. I really liked this little story, and I agree with Rosemary, that it is complete in itself, great work and I can't wait to see what comes next.

Please go on, I beg thee. Ik the intention of yours might be to just leave the imagination of the reader to wonder, but I would truly love to know what the reasoning behind the concealment of the fire-axe and to know more about Boxhead.
Overall nice concept and you did a great job at giving a detailed description.

absolutely beautiful, and emotional..... 10/10

such clever, much enjoyed
brilliant word-play, It's well written

Please do continue this story, I really like it a lot and I do think that by leaving it off as you did with that cliffhanger at a moment when one wrong choice could be fatal. I would honestly love to see you continue this.