slade

Please do continue this story, I really like it a lot and I do think that by leaving it off as you did with that cliffhanger at a moment when one wrong choice could be fatal. I would honestly love to see you continue this.

I'm actually surprised with how this concluded, needless to say how I expected it to end was spun around a 180. I really liked this little story, and I agree with Rosemary, that it is complete in itself, great work and I can't wait to see what comes next.

Please go on, I beg thee. Ik the intention of yours might be to just leave the imagination of the reader to wonder, but I would truly love to know what the reasoning behind the concealment of the fire-axe and to know more about Boxhead.
Overall nice concept and you did a great job at giving a detailed description.

absolutely beautiful, and emotional..... 10/10

such clever, much enjoyed
brilliant word-play, It's well written

I'm really liking this storyline you have going on, covering a lot of bases in life that not many people cover. Not to mention you do a damn fine job in doing so, can't wait for the next part to see where it goes!

Idk how you've been, or what's going on in your life today, but I'm glad I read this, and I hope you're doing a lot better, or at least doing well for yourself.


Yours Truly,
Slade

Glad to see your stories are still as good as the day I lost them... I hope life's been treating you well.