Striker

this is honestly so bloody beautiful, like honestly.... great job capturing all that emotion, I could feel everything that was written here as if I was there.. and it also helps with the immersion for my name also being Dylan, but unlike this Dylan I don't have the kickass singing voice to boot lol.

My Penis.... is in a state of shock and has that feeling where you know you see something happen to someone and you just grimace and just scream no inside your head a million times over? yeah that's me right now..... but I regret nothing

I'm really liking this story, it's interesting how you format the story. Can't wait for the next part d:

This was a mighty fine read. I enjoyed every minute of it, I can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Omg this was amazing! reminds me of the time i got lost at an airport. Needless to say my grandparents were both very mad but very happy lol.

This hits hard, really really hard. I felt every bit of emotion in this story and it's a really fantastic read. Great job and keep of the good work!

I read it because it sounded interesting and that it was, but it was also very relatable in more ways than one.

Yeah honestly mate this is a great story, and I can see it going for as long as you are willing to make it, but keep up the great work my friend. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.