Striker

It's a beautiful poem, nicely written and well, has a great structure and a wonderful meaning of which I can relate to.

You know that I'd love an epilogue of everyone else's POV. Keep up the great work love.

My Penis.... is in a state of shock and has that feeling where you know you see something happen to someone and you just grimace and just scream no inside your head a million times over? yeah that's me right now..... but I regret nothing

Yeah honestly mate this is a great story, and I can see it going for as long as you are willing to make it, but keep up the great work my friend. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Hits close to home, doesn't it? Ik it does for me.. All too well. But anyways, Keep up the great work love, Can't wait for the final part! <3

This was a mighty fine read. I enjoyed every minute of it, I can't wait to see what else you come up with.

I'm really liking this story, it's interesting how you format the story. Can't wait for the next part d:

Omg this was amazing! reminds me of the time i got lost at an airport. Needless to say my grandparents were both very mad but very happy lol.