United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
it was good but (this is going to sound weird but) with future works, maybe try to make the rhyming lines go ABABCDCD... or something like that instead of AABBCCDD because it does give a different feel so idk just try it out, otherwise, l like the words
no. no no no. you can not just end it there! the ending was so short! maybe write another version of the story that is not just a text but more of a narrative? but dont leave it like this!
nice i like the story, i know it is a short story, but maybe next time add some more details? idk but it was good
its cute. a different stile than i usually read or write, but i like it. how long have you been writing poems? also lol i hate when there is no category for what we write, hahaha.
omg love this sooooooo muuuuchh. amazing!
this gave me so many feeeelz! so so so sweet, and a great story!