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its cute. a different stile than i usually read or write, but i like it. how long have you been writing poems? also lol i hate when there is no category for what we write, hahaha.

nice i like the story, i know it is a short story, but maybe next time add some more details? idk but it was good

is this for someone or just imagination?

Okay a few things, on the very first sentence there should be a comma after right, in the 2nd paragraph, the last part should end with a period. In the last paragraph at the beginning I think you meant while instead of why, and then when the dialogue switches to the next person, a new paragraph should start. Okay, now on to the next part, I thought it was really great and cant wait to read part 2. Love the plot so far.

this is a really cute story :) i like it a lot, do u have any editors? is you don't mind, when you write your next story, i could help you edit it? ether way the story was cute

this is a beautiful story with a even more beautiful meaning and hope. amazing as always

omg i love this! it is short but so powerful and the rhymes are amazing! good job!

i love this and i loved how it rhymed at the beginning! nice work!