TheWeridDuckling

Nice job!

i feel this o-o

First of all, that painter needs therapy.
Second, when writing dialogue, create a new paragraph for each new person speaking.
and lastly, try not to switch point-of-view in the middle of the story. It gets confusing for the reader.

Please, dont give up! I enjoy reading and watching your progress and I would absolutely hate myself if one day you were just gone. Please, I'm begging you. I know you can get through this. You just have to stay strong. If you wont do it for yourself, do it for me. Please...

so sad....I LIKE IT!

I love David's character. :)

Hey, I get it. My mom was raised like that, so was my aunt (my mom's toxic brother's ex-wife) You and millions of others are going through that :) also, I've saved a lot of people online from committing and one of my friends too ._.

You are not alone!! We can get through this together!! :D

I really liked it you should make more like this (: