Thomas Ray

Um.... This is very good. I'm glad there's another part, because I feel personally offended that someone read that notebook!

I like this, the first half especially.

This feels like a first draft, as some of the dialogue is a little rough and somethings aren't as clear as they maybe can be, but I'm actually really interested in the Devil's Boy. I can safely say that if I read this in a library, I'd check the book out.
Also, don't feel pressure to get the first draft perfect. I know from experience that if you try to make your beginnings perfect, writing anything other than beginnings is extremely difficult.

Your writing style is awesome. "And yes, it was very dramatic," gets me every time. The narrator has a voice, and it's a fun one.
Still don't know about the bacon theme, though.

As with most poems, there are some strange word choices here, but that isn't important. The emotional story it tells is awesome.