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Thomas Ray

ThomastheRay is from US United States • 22 y/o • Male

Hi, welcome to my profile. If you'd like feedback on your writing send me a message!

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‘Friends’ , ‘Best Friends’ and Me by HudaFatima

I think it's vital to trust others as much as you want them to trust you. This is not meant to be an argument, I really like this.

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I Cant Breathe by

This is perfect

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My Imaginary Friend by

Arite, I wanna read everything you write from here on out. I'm really really annoying these.

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Forgiven? by melissak

I like this, the first half especially.

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take flight (part five) by ♥ ᵍ๏вℓ𝓲ℕ ♥

Lemmie just hold my thoughts until I finish the next part.

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take flight (part six) by ♥ ᵍ๏вℓ𝓲ℕ ♥

I refuse. I refuse. No. This is no. I want more Everli.
THIS IS NOT OKAY.
I want Everli back.

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take flight (epilogue) by ♥ ᵍ๏вℓ𝓲ℕ ♥

This is easily the most emotional part. Only the end is rushed, and even that is fine.
Oh, I love this story so much.

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