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Thomas Ray

ThomastheRay is from US United States • 22 y/o • Male

Hi, welcome to my profile. If you'd like feedback on your writing send me a message!

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‘Friends’ , ‘Best Friends’ and Me by HudaFatima

I think it's vital to trust others as much as you want them to trust you. This is not meant to be an argument, I really like this.

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Time Changed Their Ways by Kaprie Keeling

This, this is amazing. I love the rhythm and the words are perfect. I love it.

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Forgiven? by melissak

I like this, the first half especially.

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Black Gloves by Kaprie Keeling

Wow, that took a turn. I love it. I can't help but wonder what happens to them next. I do feel like the writing could use a little more showing than telling, but the characters feel individual, and I like all three of them, and while it hints at a larger story, leaving it here still satisfies me.
My thoughts are all over the place right now...

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Angels (Part 1) by TheForgotten

Angels..... Hmm.... I like this.

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A Moment of Power by Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik

I'm not sure what to say, but... I recommend. I favorite. This is favorite-worthy

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Missing the Thought of You by LeCat127

*applause*

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